Purpose: Describe a Moment in time for soldiers.
WALT: Describe what and how the ANZAC soldiers would have .1-Seen 2-Felt 3-Heard 4-Smell onboard the ship as they waved goodbye to their loved ones way to WAR.
As I sat on the edge of the large,hard steel ship with my legs dangling limply over board I could see my Children waving and my Wife crying.
I felt nervous. I might not return from War.
I heard people on the ground crying like it was death.
I could smell… fumes from the ships engine and perfume from my wife.
I was thinking that my wife’s tears wouldn’t stop flowing until I get back.
By Tui 15.05.14